Lincoln: Well, this was cool. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Anyway, here's my fanfiction. "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! In. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. ), (It cuts to the main street. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. (They arrive home. "Well mom, you know what I think?" "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." "Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. Nobody ruins my life, casts me out and then uses me, understand!? N Eddy's big picture show . It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. Why do these three buffoons have the room. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My own family, locking me out. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Trivia. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! NOTHING!! I hate boring science lectures! No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! NOBODY!!! Lincoln: You can't do anything right! it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) Look, I see sweaty footprints! What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! So, I plan to rectify that. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. ENOUGH!!! I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! And after that, the whole room was silent. "EXCUSE ME???!!!" We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." You took it too far! Ruth shouted back, insulted. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" Why are you being arrested?! The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. Youve made your point! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. (Inhales, then exhales) "I. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." I even threatened you to go to my game! But, if what this guy was saying is true, then the only reason the room would show up as vacant is if the family was checking out. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! (facepalms. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!! I don't need anyone! And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! I need a very big, long rest from them. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. Why did you kick me out of the house? Luan brought it. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Just a head's up. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! Lucy: Lincoln, stop! Luna: That was rockin'. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. What do you think, Pep? except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. Lincoln: I don't believe it! I have just had it! ", Lincoln: "Still, I wish I would've just told you guys the truth, then maybe none of this would've happened. The voice asked. What's going on here?! Lincoln After Dark | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom But dont worry, youre still a great writer. ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. Yes." Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Lynn Sr. asked. ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Rita: Lincoln?! Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. YOU HATE US!!! Start talking. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. Rita: Okay Lincoln! Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Lola: Hey, Lincoln . Learn more. Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] I'm the Duke! This is a family moment. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. We know you are!". Why? turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! Thats what my problem is! Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. kamenrider. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? I heard you scream! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. Experimental One Shot. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. Luna. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] Just so you know, in case you ask about that). Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Rita: Sweetie, please! Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. I HATE THIS!!! ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending - DeviantArt Which she did. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Leni: Linky, dont shout. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". ", Lincoln: "No. Journal. Hmm. Hahahaha! And can you please unlock my room for me? I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! Sam: Luna, I got your letter. Lincoln: (tearful) No! I tried to make it as comical as i could. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. We feel so ashamed! Lynn Sr.: NO! Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! She pointed to the back row of seats. This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. I was being selfish!. . While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! "Good riddance." "Lynn? Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. My team needs that! (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! Lola finished with. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt No Such Luck (Alternate Ending) by Alexh4070 on DeviantArt NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Tell the community what's on your mind. I have failed as a human being. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. I was horrible to you! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Lincoln: yeah. This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). House of Lies alt ending14. Slow down Lynn! Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. You're scaring even me. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! Plot. (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). Everyone awed over this.] So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. Lincoln: I said NO! Any bad luck? (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! Actually, there's something I need to do! There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. Rita: Honey! Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. Was the thought on her mind. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Rita: Sweetie, calm down. Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Not a loud alt ending6. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. One of the Boys alt ending4. Then, he opened it up. ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. We don't know what we were thinking! [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? You're all insane!!! She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Now, let me make this clear! "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version Im melting! Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." It's too broken, even for me! Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! The Loud House: The Loud Luck (Rewrite) - DeviantArt There's a massive storm heading your way." I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. "Sigh. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. They all shouted. I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. Rita stood up and heads to the door. the loud house no such luck alternate ending deviantart SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. You overreact to everything! Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" Luan added. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. I loved it. Lincoln: Okay. Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Lynn: NO! Are you no longer grounded to the room?" NO!" She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane | The loud house fanart But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! At least this thick skin won't let me down! Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. (Family begins to come around. Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. Brawl in the family alt ending8. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! I thought you were my family! Lana: Gee. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Suite and Sour / Back in Black. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. How can I help you?" So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Lola added, shouting. I hate pageants! "Is that so?" "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! We don't need to get violent here. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. I don't even care about that anymore. This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. I hate fashion shows! Everyone finally realized that what they've done. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna.